This is the dumbest thing you have ever written!!!!!! Not by a longshot Trin, not even close
Mackintosh
I hate my ex.
"Why does the same guy who happily pays $8 to watch "White Chicks" and spend $4 on pop corn or $18 on two pizzas turn around and bitch about paying $15 to $20 for a software product that took an immense amount of effort to create that they'll be able to make use of for years?" Oh I don't know, maybe cause the guy had bought OD, paid for subscriptions for the past 5 years or so, subscribed to WC, then renewed for another couple of years, bought the "premium" suites, icons, CursorXP and a
1) Oh the pain, the horrible pain...Oh the excitement, oh God I feel wonderful!...Oh the pain, the horrible pain 2) Duhhh...duhhh...oooh...*lamp smashes on the foor* whee...headspin 3) Righto, I'll make sure never to drive on the sidewalk again 4) Damn, that was fast 5) You mean I have to scrub toilets for a living and you'll pay me how much for that? Meh, good enough.
This is fucking amazing mig (damn I suck at commenting on poems)
I'm not good at constructive critique...but I love your stuff. This was excellent. Keep pumping them out. I've always wanted to write a similiar piece, but always fall short at articulating my thoughts. Again...loved it.
Don't know why, but this piece really moved me. Thanks for sharing it mate.
Ooooh...that's all I can say right now, excuse me while I pick my jaw off the floor.
Short and to the point...very nice Nic. Once upon a time that could've been about me.
changenothingdon’tgooutside anymore ‘cause you’re myhero but they will just tell you you’re too hard forme or something they like todo that stuff they'drather it madesenseto them but it won’t ever so don’t you listen ok This struck a huge cord with me mig, I "feel" it <img src="../images/smiles/smile.gi
I'd rather get a critical comment than nothing at all. There's nothing more disheartening than when my poems/lyrics get no comments whatsoever, considering how much they mean to me. Sure, in the end, I do write for myself and I do realise it's hard to comment on poetry, but it's a huge encouragement knowing that people take the time to read and comment on them. A comment is the only way for me to judge whether I struck a cord with anyone.
I always thought it was taking a dump on somebody's doorstep and then knocking and asking for toilet paper. Thanks for clearing that misconception up for me
! Top stuff mate
Why won't morning come and make the night leave me alone? You have no idea how many times I wondered about that... Now I wonder how come I've never written a mini-poem about my troubles with insomnia.
Wow...I'm impressed, loved it mate, amazing stuff.
Nice...I like it... I'm sorry, I'm much better at writing poems than commenting on them I think you've pretty much covered what most of us wish they did or had
I used to get three or four a day when I first moved out, or rather was abandoned by my parents (lol). Then, fortunately, it was daily, now it's every few days. I do look forward to them, my mum doesn't nag (much). I feel your pain mig, lol.
Yay, good to see you're still alive and kicking Don't worry, you'll be fine, it's always difficult at the beginning, it'll get easier as time passes, fingers crossed
Nicky! Where are you???? Let us know you're alive...I miss you.
I have my Bluetooth accessible to others on purpose, but no one's tried to contact me yet
Hey Ash and welcome to our community, hope you have an enjoyable stay and that you'll make a lot of new friends around here Enjoy!
I don't drink alcohol, so a big fat zero. People I had sex with...2, but spent nearly 8 years in relationships with them, which @ 26 isn't all that bad I guess, I like commitment Smokes...depends, anything from 5 to 30 a day, depending on stress and boredom. Never done any drugs. Favourite age...dunno, but 2000 was my best year. Countries..
You know what? I got an email from my friend this morning, and she said that she saw her on Saturday night... things were said, my feelings of hatred stirred.... I whipped this baby up in no longer than 4 minutes I could whip something up in 4 minutes too, the thing is, my initial drafts are usually to
Muggaz, I demand you immediately stop reading my poetry... I guess I'm not the only one with unreconciled anger issues around here Btw, that was superb, I really liked it...maybe because I can relate. You've kind of given me inspiration for another "angry" piece, I'll start working on it today.
I'm still here, just been busy with my own stuff