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HiddenMaster
Thank god its back. Great to see this epic moving again.
One thing. When you mentioned scientist near the end there, I think you meant someone else. Probably meant a medic or doctor or something, because, one scientist sounds wrong, and two, what the hell would they be doing on the ship? I guess to monitor the ships special systems, but sounds like engineers and that one guy could do that. Don't remember his name. But typically, the type of scientist I envisioned when you went throught that part would not be on a ship that would presumably le
Just one thing I didn't like, and that was when you said the ship was so destroyed it was unrecognizable. That doesn't make sense, as destroyed means gone, no more, something like that. Now, if it was damaged beyond recognition, I could agree with that. Just a small descriptive error. Great so far. Wonder when your going back to the Advent point of view.
Liked the new chapters pretty well, but theres a few things I didn't like. One, was the damage points and antimatter points and sheild points. It didn't sound good, especially damage points, as I believe shields and armor on ships would vary throughout the ship, and a missle or something hitting it would cause more or less damage. So, while it could be implimented, it sounds like its susposed to be in a game. Also, I have never heard that used in other books with large fleets of ships, the au
I can't stand my fragmented memories that only give me a glimpse of what life was like before
God damnit. I liked it when carriers were the main things in the game
Burn the chair
Very simple thing to remember on the topic of women on the internet. Trust nothing. The only way you can be sure that its an actual woman on the internet is that you know her personally in actuality and she told you about her profile or whatever. Other than that, don't trust anything. Same goes for guys, but to a lesser degree. Thats all I'm going to say, and the rest of the world can fuck itself for all I care. Actually, I'm sure a good portion of the world will fuck itself today. I now end
Good to know. Was afraid carriers were obsolete. Glad they just balanced them out
Last time I played the game, carrier spaming was going on like crazy, and I loved it [e digicons]:grin:[/e] Anyway, so there were several updates that looked like they killed carriers. I just want to make sure, are carrier tactics dead? I've seens several people comment about it, but I just wanted to make sure, and get a second opinion before I take on six hard AI
Looks like a lot happened while I was gone. Still writing as good as ever, I see
Go ahead and try to publish it, but I doudt stardock or iron clad will let you [e digicons]:'([/e] People could just go to this site to get the story
LALALALA... OH MY GOD. ITS, ITS PIE!!!! Just kidding. Got a little bored right there. I miss this story
I don'thave words for how magnificent this story is. The closest is briliance
Thanks. Seriously dude, this story is epic. Try to get it published, and here are the terms. To have it published, if the Ironclad people will even let you, you would have toget rid of the story on this website. I know that sucks, but it would be the only way. Did I mention it was epic
Great. Thank you for writing this
Great. Don't stop writing.
Great. Good to see you writing again. Nice use of the Atlantis and Halo things. Keep it up
Nice. Sorry I haven't commented in a while. Been busy. As for for the story, I have no complaints for the last chapter. It was great. Keep up the good work
Well, Guywhoyoudontno, I have to admit this was a pretty good chapter, and you captured the way the vassari leader paniced when faced with something completely new. So, you have redeemed yourself with this chapter. Congratulations. By the way, are you going to have any more vassari-advent encounters on here? I mean, they don't seem to encounter each other very much and it would be an epic battle for the, to fight each other. And especially to see both species's reaction to each others technol
Orodum, I need more of this story. If you don't start writing again, I will get thirty pages of pointless spam in this. Are you willing to let that atrocity happen? I hope not
No, I was insulting the Vassari and I used very crude words. By the way, I still think you should have taken a different approach to Kol taking over the ship, as I said before disabling shields or weapons or something. I still find it doudtful he could have gotten to the bridge without being killed or captured
What I said was very rude. I will not allow people to view it.
No, there would be some communication with the outside. It is rare for every ship in a fleet to be destroyed, there would have been at least some communication with another ship or several ship about an intruder on board, and it is probable that they would conclude he had taken over the ship. Either way, if no one had survived the Vassari would start to get tougher as the war dragged on, and I believe there would be more ship board combat as the war escelates. I believe as the war drags on, t