Bandits on the Loose! "I am king here." The bandit captain says. It should read: "I am king here , " t he bandit captain says. Adventurer's Remains: Needs some possessive apostrophe corrections plus one comma. Currently reads: The tree's around the caves entrance have had their bark stripped off up to nearly three times the height of a man
In the quest, "The Heirloom," there are more periods that should be commas in dialog lines: "What have you come to take, I have nothing left." she demands. Period after "left" should be a comma. "I am sorry for your loss." you say. Period after "loss" should be a comma. ...eyeing the grave she says. "I didn't know this one. Period after "she says." should be a comma. <
Just started playing Fallen Enchantress, really enjoying the game! I decided to go for the quest victory last night, and came across the following types in The Second Gate section(s) of the quest. (By the way, this entire part of the quest reads differently than the rest of the quest, like it is a rough draft almost, it is not as smoothly written). The Second Gate (with reward of "Quest of Mastery Victory" Text says: "There is blood here." one