mm, insanity, such a fickle friend. its great, (the poem i mean, not insanity) the similies and metaphors and all that fig. lang. jazz is awesome and ties it together so neatly and great. the topic is kinda spooky, but thats what makes it so neatly and greatly! (hehe adverbs turned into adjectives) on an English craze, (can't ya tell?) Liv PS- didn't mentio
pain does have that annoying, lasting effect. (affect? can never keep em straight) and the more it hurts, the deeper the scars get, the longer lasting of the effect. they multiply, and multiply, and eventually it seems they take over your soul... the sorrow, the misery, the pain, the agony. we need to learn from mistakes. hmm... i think i basically just said what you put in the poem! grrness... oh well... I love You and this poem
Right on my friend, right on... what we see in the cinemas and the comfort of our own homes is NOT life!! ITS A MADE UP STIMULATION Y'ALL! and what Beebes said, just deal! *giggles* :D Love Ya Zoo! ~Liv
wow, Shaun dear... mmm lots of anger, and i'm wondering if i want to know what people did, or was it just being dramatic as usual? (whats new?) xo, Liv
yeah totally, i miss you Al!(a lot x a lot) ~Liv
wowzerbegeez... that's one damned good poem! I love it! I love You! ~Liv
"Your spelling and grammer are horrible." Hey, quit being such a mean person. If she's okay with her grammer, you shouldn't be that rude about her habits. Nobody's perfect. Stacey dear you've gotta be more careful bout those things! lol~ It's alright though, we've all walked into the wrong bathroom and not noticed it at least once. Don't stop being you Stacey, c
hey Al, man... don't worry about C. now, a lil less than a year ago, you were a shadow... and now look at ya! Your taking the lead... In the band at Ohio Northern Man! can i get a w00t w00t? your not even majoring in music!! going to italy in a few months... grrness, so lucky! *giggles* and look who's gonna be the big man now... C is just following dad's path and your breaking free from all of it. just don't forget me tho please! i know how much
you think your poetry sucks??? mmm wow... a years worth of time sure does change things... your poetry is awesome, Zoo! ~Liv
The over sex of civilization is one of them, but those darn Kidz Bop Cd's just make me want to spit nails. Yeah, like the first two of those cd's were like older stuff from the 70's and 80's. But now in some recent one they had "Are You Gonna Be My Girl" by: Jet in it, and, well come on, these kids are 11 and under!! And they are already under this influence through a supposed children appropriate cd??? its kinda gross.
Yeah, thats what i was aiming for. Sure, sex is great but do we have to influence children with thoughts of it and other things such as swearing, violence, and drugs/alchohol abuse? The media gives the idea to young ones that to do these things, and its just completely wrong. I also tryed to point out that we seem to have less decency every day. Its kinda disgusting but as ParaTed2k said... Sex, conveinience, and comfort are what makes us the happi
Wow... I love this poem, Shaun... mmm feels like warm sushine and cool, lemonaide lips.... its absolutely, positivly great... and I want to walk with you for all of time... ~Liv
you know, if you listen to about any top-hit song, or any modern song for that matter, it has a kind of sexual idiom or similie or metaphor or any of that figurative language jazz. for example... "Save a Horse (Ride a Cowboy)" well come on, its in the title! and you know, i betcha if you listen to the news tonight at 6 there will be some report about s
Friends, Something to cherish, Something to hold on to. Life isn’t the same without them. true, completely true... life just isn't the same without the ones who we call friends... the ones we love, listen, and hold on to... great article, Zoo! x's and o's x a billion and trillion ~Liv
*giggles* hehe... that'd be something... ~Liv ps... Love Ya bunches Shaun!!!
Shaun, I'm feeling just wonderful with You in my life! tho allergies are kinda gettin me down... xoxo ~ Liv
wow... I love it Zoo.... its one of those heartjerkers, but its absolutely beautiful... I love You! ~Liv
hey welcome back Shadow! (? maybe?) And I agree with Shadow too... your really lucky for that. ~Liv
wow, this is so wonderful yet so tragic and true.... it hurts to read it, thats what makes it so awesome i believe.... ~Liv
Band Girl- don't let this one guy get you down like that... he's an (grr~profanity) anyways. You are such a wonderful person... and letting one person ruin the chances for the rest would hurt so much. I know i'm not the first person you'd come to talk to, but if you need someone- I'm here (your "girls") ~Liv
mmm... sweet times under the stars in the middle of june with your friends, playing truth or dare... thats what this reminds me of... so sweet, so simple, so very, very gorgeous. ~Liv
wow~ I'm with Beebes here... about you being so religious and that this is about one of the truest things to say... -Liv
Shaun, spring isn't too bad... no matter how things may turn out you will always have someone there that loves you... Don't worry, Be happy! (little coolwhip girl smiles big toothy smile) ~Liv
wow... this speaks levels... so many people have self-esteem issuses and are always feeling like this. another awesome poem, Zoo! ~Liv
Wow, Zoo... this is so lovely and beautiful. i know this isn't about who i wish it was, but its an amazing piece... ~Liv
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