Eddies in the Flow

August 28, 2005 9:40 PM from

Waist down, waste away
caught in torrents
eddies in the flow
pulling hope life love
happiness pain fear

fear

Like a whirlpool, catching
the unaware in
drowning power
chaotic, destructive
that is the power
of the hate you hold.

poetry

1,252 views 4 replies

Reply #1 August 29, 2005 7:54 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Hmmm....well, well...your genius never fails to impress me, Al.

Great job!

~Zoo

Reply #2 August 29, 2005 7:57 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

I don't think it's genius, more like 6% dumb luck and 94% improv.

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Reply #3 August 29, 2005 8:04 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

I don't think it's genius, more like 6% dumb luck and 94% improv.

Ah...the recipie for the government...

~Zoo

Reply #4 August 29, 2005 8:05 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Sweet... that's quality right there.

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