my raps

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listen to this you gotta bare wittness
i have this presence percision to summon a pretense list
put it through your mind one at a time
dont forget its time to bind
forget about the go be sure to let it show
your essence
its trixed mixed when there is a sysnthesis fix on the realist
so lets repeat the lines for the kiddes that ryhme in there hearts and for there minds
repeat the find if the kind provide
repeat the sign if find provides
keep your feet if the kind presiet
wait thats f e a t if you decide to get ahead of me
art
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Reply #1 Top
get ahead, get behind, or just get lost, from the top to the bottom I've been measuring the cost, I've tossed the dog a bone and I leave the kitty alone, at least until she purrs and at that time I disperse, the verse, with each stanza and chorus, the ladies and girls will adore us, it floors us to see them winkin' this way, with each lip and sway of the hips that has a tendency to say...look at me, touch me and tease, say thank you and please, then get on your knees, you gets none of these, unless you can pay the fees, well geez, it's beginning to get rough, and I'll drop from the top to see if you've had enough of this stuff, and I don't rashion the passion, I give it full effect cause you know my lovin' is everlastin', enhancin' we dancin', prancin' like deer, and I hope you're leaving your place just to meet me right here, in fear that you won't see my again, but I'm typin' right now lookin' for a pad and a pen...and then....
Reply #2 Top
No offense, but if I've never heard of some of the words you use and I couldn't find them in a dictionary either....
'Persision' - by that do you mean 'precision' as in to be precise?
'sommon' - I think that's 'summon', as in to call?

There are more, but I think I managed to decipher them. The one that really confused me was 'preciet'. I don't know if you mean 'preciate, as in 'appreciate' or something else entirely.

If I could understand it I'd probably like it.
Reply #3 Top
well what about mine dharmagrl...no props for me eh? I see how it is.
Reply #4 Top
Sorry, Suspeckted....
I like yours better. I don't have to decipher it, and you use words that are found in the dictionary.

There, I said it.
Reply #5 Top
yall are just kidding around right?
Reply #6 Top
I don't mind a little rhyme battle? Who's next?
Reply #7 Top
Bruder Grimm am Mikro, explosiv wie Nitro-
Glyzerin auf Beats aus Psilocybin, fahr ich wie auf schienen,
verfasse meine Lyrics so emsig wie die Honigbienen,
in Waben wabern, brems´ich die aus die wie Knaben labern,
nur wegen schnödem Mammon, mit ihren Gaben hadern,
lassen Federn, fühln´sich umstellt wie die Frenchies einst in Sedan,
denn ich zeig Dir wie weit man mit dem Mikro gehn kann.
Mit dem Janneman im Rücken betrete ich ohne dass ich überlege,
Raubtiergehege, ohne Angst.
Weil das selbstverständlöich ist wenn Du weisst dass dein Flügelmann
sämtliche Unebenheiten im akkustischen Gelände ausbügeln kann.
Und jetzt nenn mich Gott man, denn ich schaff Stoff ran,
Hier kommt heut HipHop wie´n Schuss aus der Shotgun.

BAM !

German Stylz, over&out.
Reply #8 Top
Ser Gut!