Reliquary Item #22. Appears to be an ordinary grey sword... In fact, its appearances is due to its magical properties
gray... "its appearances are" or "its appearance is"
Reliquary item #23. in such a way that it can mimick ...apparently found a dagger-like fleshsword... Or it may be that the club understands its prey through some esotheric method.
mimic... Fleshsword (if you are going to capitalize Fleshclub)... maybe ... esoteric
Reliquary Item #25. to avoid having to wash your teeth, .... She caught a fewer at her wedding night... Apparently, her body had not built any immune system over the years,
brush not wash?... fever on her wedding night... built an immune system
Reliquary Item #27. With no known name, the mace is just refered to as the "Possessed mace".
Reliquary Item #30. It is an ancient battle armor. … the staff is rarely used without
is it armor or a staff?
Reliquary Item #31. Grail over long periods of time will slowly heal any injury the inbiber has suffered. … The Low King Osrak tried to use it to heal her dying husband,
imbiber... Queen not King
Reliquary Item #33. One of the few magical swords in the world that noone in their right mind wishes to possess.
Reliquary Item #34. and then found by his sister who again left me in the dark." … All in all, there are 211 names
"and was then found" or "and then was found"... In all
Reliquary Item #35. On the plus side,
"However," sounds better
Reliquary Item #36. one of the most powerful objects in all of existance,... the Wooden Sword must have lost almost all of its leading up to this day.
existence... all of its what? what did it lose? effects? magic?
NOTE: THERE ARE TWO #36 ENTRIES (duplicates)
Reliquary Item #37. A huge maul, permanently tinted red, … a living thing in itself, travelling from mind to mind,
A huge maul that is permanently tinted red "by the..." ... "a living thing in and of itself"
Reliquary Item #40. is a living thing in itself,
"is a living thing in and of itself"
Reliquary Item #41. What appears to be a normal backpack. Its true function is made clear whenever its user is in dire danger.
"Although it appears to be a normal backpack, its true function..."