"So-called 'adventurers' have entered the forbidden dungeon of Ithyrl and unleashed the long banished demon Kroxir, killing them in the process"
As a teacher, I am saddened whenever I see grammar errors such as this in print, or on the Internet as in this case. Such errors in games are particularly troubling to me because I know they will be seen primarily by young people. Having played many Stardock games, I know this to be a chronic problem; having read many reviews of Stardock games, I know I am not the first to point it out. I’m quite prepared to be accused of negativity, perhaps in colorful language, by other forum members, but the intent is constructive criticism. Stardock, you may not realize it, but you need to hire a professional writer. Your games are great, which I imagine is because of your back-ground as serious computer programmers, but your stories are hackneyed and your prose is poor, probably for the same reason.