Poem #2 by the JU Exquisite Corpse

"Conspicuous Concupiscence of Littoral Lovers"

September 13, 2004 8:34 AM from

Conspicuous Concupiscence of Littoral Lovers

fetid feta fungus ferments frequently, fumigates funhouse

I produced more smoke than heat
i'm only satisfied when rolling on the floor

I tried so hard not to remember...
A lovely flower has no petals
She looked at him with wondering eyes, what IS that fanky smell?

Shimoga is a town and a nice town it is
Angels don't sing in the style of Troubadour

A fine layer of dust coated everything.

entertainment

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Reply #1 September 13, 2004 9:38 AM from

JoeUser Forums Top

citahellion, take a bow. i love it !. we are all so er, unusual, aren't we !

vanessa/mig XX

Reply #2 September 13, 2004 9:55 AM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Nicely 'collaged' poem, if I could call it that.

Well done.

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Reply #3 September 13, 2004 10:11 AM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Very nice! I feel proud to be a part of this one! Thanks for letting me in!

Reply #4 September 13, 2004 11:46 AM from

JoeUser Forums Top

My pleasure, chip! Please feel free to send in some more. (All the rest of you, too!)

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