Good Morning
I'm going to give your mod a run-though. When I do these sorts of things, I tend to pile on the comments. If you don't like them, please just ignore them...I don't
mean to offend 
(I'm running a bunch of other mods along side; hopefully I don't run into compatibility issues).
To open off, I'm REALLY looking forward to this mod. I've been hoping for a 'cancelling' out of the undead for quite some time now.
- In the "Who Are You?" menu, the Church and Grand Cathedral do not have icon images. (just a yellow blank circle). Is this suppose to be the case?
- The Grand Cathedral grants "+1 faith per turn". To be consistent, this should be "+1 Faith per Season".
- For the Vampiric Greatsword, are the "+3 Hit Points" of a permanent nature? If not, perhaps it should have the same text as the Tear of Cyndrum "+3 Hit Points whenever an enemy is killed" just to stay consistent.
- The Sight bonus given to Ellderon is not mentioned in the Sovereign abilities. In addition, having that large a section revealed is pretty overpowered. I recommend scaling back to only +2 Sight. edit: Oh I see (get it.)
"Eyes of the Cheater" is an item given to him at the start of the game. Did you intend for him to have this because the text even says "You shouldn't be having this!"? Also, very overpowered item.
- In the build menu, the "Church" icon does not appear. ( just a white blank box). Is this suppose to be the case?
- In the research screen, the "Church" and "Grand Cathedral" icons do not appear. (just a small white blank box). Is this suppose to be the case?
- I am unable to choose the Paladin path at level 2 with Ellderon.
Well, without being able to access the Paladin path, not much sense in continuing my game (which is sad cause it was turning out to be quite serene). Nevertheless, I do believe I have the mod installed correctly. EDIT: I just loaded up the Paladin mod and did not get the path as a choice. Therefore, I believe the problem lies with that mod and not yours.
Comments?