This guy seems kind of inconsistent.  'I ws raised to the sword, youngling.  I killed from the nursery; there were none fit to play with me then, or now. I spare you the blade if you pay my price.  I make your enemies mine.  I kill for your glory, and my pleasure.'

Thats fine, good write up.  I then expect a bad ass sword wielding fighter that no one can beat.

Imagine my surprise when he has the following traits;  Evoker, Death Disciple, Fire Disciple, and weak.  (Also, trog blood and path of the warrior.)

He's also carrying a battle axe not a sword.

My suggestions; first broadsword not a battleaxe, second lose the magic traits and get some path of the warrior traits.  Finally weak?  This doesn't fit with the description above at all.